Sunday, October 17, 2021

Is it just wishful thinking?



 ChaCha waited patiently for Milo to begin, but it seemed to take him a while to get started as they rode on the stead's silky back at a mellow pace.

"I met him at the Academy," Milo finally said. ChaCha smiled with her eyes closed trying to imagine her brother and Milo as equals in a scholarly world.

"He was the head of his class," Milo said her brother knew many languages and was a swordsman as well. "I was just a servant boy." 

ChaCha didn't like that part.

"Was he brave?"

"Yes."

ChaCha sighed with a smile.

"He kept the others from hurting me," Milo told her. "And showed me how to defend myself. Later, he even showed me how to read and write, too."

"So was he a good teacher?"

"Um."

"Is that all you can say about him?" Why didn't he talk more? She wanted every detail.

"I knew him for a long time, back then," Milo sighed. "I was small. He was always taller than me. He got along with everyone, which I can't say for everyone I knew there. If only I could spot a trick like he did. I might not have gotten into so much trouble."

"Well, you're here now. Maybe he's still watching out for you," ChaCha laid her ear next to his back and listened to his heart.

"It's a good thought." The way he said it, ChaCha believed it. Maybe it was her brother who sent the stallion.

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  2. You are a master at sprinkling in dialogue for maximum effect. There are poetic touches and phrases that I loved.

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  3. Uy que tierna escena me sacaste un suspiro. Te mando un beso

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  4. What a wonderful installment! I love that Milo knew ChaCha's brother, and that he was Milo's champion. And that he might have sent the stallion! These connections, paired with your beautiful imagery, are just the right ingredients for an epic tale. I can't wait to find out what happens with Milo and ChaCha next!

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    1. Oh, thank you for your encouragement❤🍂❤ I greatly appreciate it!

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  5. Great dialogue, I felt like I was really listening to Milo and ChaCha while reading this chapter.

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    1. Thank you❤ thanks so much for reading ❤❤❤

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  6. I loved the chapter. I'm trying to give the characters a face, but I only see the guy in the photos lol
    xo
    https://www.dearlytay.com.br/

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  7. É muito bom saber que seu irmão é uma boa pessoa e ajuda os outros...Gostei de ler!

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    1. It's great to know that your brother is a good person and helps others... I enjoyed reading!

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  8. Dear friend! Descriptions are amazing! Please increase the decriptions into next chapters. We know his Brother very well by the Milo's words. I really felt myself into Alphonse Daudet's books.

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